Sunday, September 15, 2013

Entry 3 for Test 2

Ujian personaliti diri, cerita lelaki kontemporari : Revolusi Hidup Sang NeoMaskulin

http://teechconsult.typepad.com/note/2013/03/ujian-personaliti-diri-cerita-lelaki-kontemporari-revolusi-hidup-sang-neomaskulin.html

Submitted by : Muhammad Shahidan Ameer B. Hammad, UiTM #2011282812

Although these articles have much information that is fun to be read, it has some information that can be questionable about that. For example, you just said “Sebagai lelaki dengan aspirasi neomaskulin, kedatangan tahun yang baru kita sambut bukan dengan resolusi tetapi dengan EVOLUSI,” which you just provide the information and the sequences from that information without giving the relevant information. I as a reader want to ask, do you have any authority to say that? I can’t see your credibility although from your article to say that you have an authority to prove it. It just an opinion right?

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